Elmore Leonard, author of Get Shorty and other hugely successful books, was once asked why his books were so popular and easy to read. Leonard answered, "Simple. I just leave out the parts that readers skip."
This week, when you start revising, imagine yourself as your reader. What parts of the message would you skip?
Leave them out.


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Posted by: Tom Groshens | 21 April 2012 at 08:55 AM