Roy Jacobsen, at the always instructive and entertaining Writing, Clear and Simple, has posted a helpful explanation of restrictive clauses and how not to overuse them.
Beginning with the nursery rhyme "This Is the House That Jack Built," he moves to sentences like this:
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To see his easy revision, check out his post.


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